ANGRY VATI LUDWIG X BAD TEEN READER

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You sat on your bed nervously watching Lorraine walk to one side of the room to the other panicking through the time thats going very slowly in your opinion which you are no where complaining about.

"Oh please oh please don't call my papa, dont call my papa." Lorraine begged to herself. Which the more you see her panick the more guilty you feel about Lorraine getting into trouble.

"Ohhh __________ what am I going to do! Papa is going to kill me!" Lorraine said

"Jou know jou're not the only one going to getting in trouble jou know." You said annoyed, Lorraine looked at you but said nothing she went to the corner and sat down with her knees to her chest and whimpered 

"Oh papa please don't be too mad at me." Hearing that a pang of guilt struck your chest. 

"Ooh pleaze Lorraine stop crying jou have no reason to cry." You said

Lorraine stopped crying and looked at you 

"…"

"Lorraine?" You said

"FIRST OF ALL I DO TO HAVE A REASON TO CRY I'M GOING GET HOME AND HAVE MY ASS BEAT BECAUSE OF YOU! THE FRIEND WHO BEGGED ME TO GO,THE FRIEND WHO TOLD  ME TO LIE TO MY PAPA! THE FRIEND THAT SHOULD BE MY FRIEND AS I AM WELL HER'S" Lorraine yelled  putting her face back in her knees crying

You paused in shock for a moment but then open your mouth to say something but before you could say anything your vati walked in 

"Lorraine vhat's jour papa'z number?" He ask her, you heard a faint whimper from Lorraine

"Can, can y-you j,just call, call my, my Aunt Katyisha…please." She softly begged your vati,he shook his head

"Nien, tell me his number." He repeated Lorraine gave him her papa's number after a few minutes Ludwig told her that her papa is coming over.

"*gulp* i am so dead." She said standing in the corner. 

----------Lorraine's pov------

I stood in the corner in the tight mini dress knowing papa, once he see me in this I'll never be able to seat for a month! I don't want to be spanked! I try my best to be good I do its just-

"KOLKOLKOLKOL" THUMP, THUMP oooh no papa! He is, he is here! What am I going to do how am I going explain this to him oh why oh why meeee!

(Starts crying :( PAPA GOING TO BEAT MY A$$) 

--------now you pov----

I watch Lorraine panicked in the corner when a creepy kol sound with heavy foot steps came close to the door I looked at Lorraine her knees buckled in fear as the foot steps come closer, her eyes filled with terror as the door opened Mr. Bragniski walked in with a creepy smile that gave me chills.

"Sunflower, did I ever say you was allowed to go to a party?" He asked as his aura glowed purple

"N,net pa,papa." She said shaking he nodded

"And did I ever say you could wear something like that?" He spoke his chilling voice made a chill run down my spine

"N,net pa,papa." She said 

"Does that mean you been a naughty sunflower and needs to be punished,Da?"   
"D,ddd,da pa,pa,papa."  Her lips tremmble with every word she stuttered out shrinking into the corner her papa nodded

"I agree sunflower"

"But, but-"

"NET, BUTS OUT OF YOU SUNFLOWER!" He snapped making me and Lorraine jump as he grabbed her and pulled her out of the corner

"And when we get home you will get punished with my hand, the brush and the birch, Da." He said

"NET PA,PAPA PLEASE! I,I PROMISE I,I will be, be good…" as that was all I heard as they went down stairs .

After that I heard foot steps of my vati comming upstairs

*gulp*

----------at the beginning of story where you first read at the story-----

Here we are, me in the corner with my vati holding his doubled looped belt.

 "V,VATI PLEAZE!" I begged 

"NIEN LIEBE JOU HAVE TO FACE THE CONSEQUENCES FOR VHAT JOU DONE!" He said pulling me over his knees holding me still I felt the skirt lift up and my panties down

"NIEN VATI NOT BARE!" I cried out as he lifted his hand with the belt ready to strike

SWAT, SWAT, SWAT, SWAT, SWAT 

"Owwwww! Vati Ztop!" I cried but he ignored me as he place more blows on my backside

SWAT,SWAT SWAT, SWAT, SWAT 

"OOOOOWWWIIEE! Ztop it!" I coverd my bottom 

"Liebe move jour hand!" He demanded I refused to so he pinned my arm behind my back

SWAT SWAT SWAT SWAT SWAT SWAT SWAT SWAT SWAT SWAT

I SCREAMED in pain as he continues to strike me with the belt tears glide down my face as I sniffle and whimper in pain

SWAT SWAT SWAT SWAT SWAT SWAT SWAT SWAT SWAT SWAT SWAT SWAT after like forty or more blows he held me in his arms, I wiped my tears away and sniffled into his shirt

"I,I,I'm zor-zorry va-vati" I said as he rocked me in his lap 

"Zhhh it is ok liebe." He said but then the guilt got to me again

"NIEN! IT IZ NOT OK! ITZ ALL MY FAULT! NOW LORRAINE NOT MY FRIEND ANYMORE AND HER PAPA IS PUNISHING HER FAR VORST THEN JOU DID TO ME!!!" I said, vati sighed and nodded

"Ja I know but I have no power over Mr. Bragniski and vhat he does to Lorraine is not my business."

"But,but-"

"But for jou and her being friends again iz all up to jou two." He said I nodded and agreed

"Now get ready for bed, tomorrow jou ztill have zchool." He said leaving closing the door behind him. I got into the shower and put on my fluffy black, red and yellow striped pajamas and went to bed because tomorrow I will apologise to Lorraine.


----------------------THE NEXT SORE TO SIT DOWN DAY-----------

Doing the same thing I do every morning  

----skip morning, I'm lazy :)-----

I tried to find Lorraine but every time I try to talk to her she runs off, during class she won't sit next to me she sit in the back of class at lunch she was no where to be found. 

So on my way home I saw Lorraine walking down the street 

"LORRAINE!" I yelled she flinched and stopped walking

"What?" She said turning to me

"Listen, about last night-"

"Forget it okay." She said looking on the ground blushing

"Nien! I'm zorry and I had no rights to be doing that to jou and I vas hoping ve ztill be friends?"  I asked 

"__________ I don't know…"

"PLEAZE," I begged with a puppy dog face

"Fine"

"Vhat?" I said making sure that I heard correctly

"*sigh* I said fine sense we are friends." She said I smiled with glee as I hugged her

"THANK JOU THANK JOU LORRAINE I PROMIZE JOU VON'T REGRETED!" 

"Yeah,yeah that's what you said last time." She said pulling me off her.

"Zooo."

"Sooo." We both laughed

"Lets never do anything ztupid like this again." I said

"Da let's not."

"Hey ___________!" I turned to see Stacy

"Ja."

"Me and my new boyfriend are going to the movies with his friends want to come?"

"Um zure vhen iz it?"

"This Thursday"

"NET!"

"Come on Lorraine!"

"OH HERE WE GO AGAIN!" Lorraine shouted I giggled

"Ja here ve go again." I giggled
-------------------THE END--------

I hope you like IT :) and I hope u comment too…

Oh and animegirl2012 I READ your comment and I was kinda laughing at them but also affended too, do you enjoy me getting in trouble by Ivan? Oh yeah and r u 18 or older because I might give you a present, A STORY ABOUT

RUSSIA AND LORRAINE but i need to know your age so I know how to keep It rated pg or not thank you:)

Russia: little sunflower going to make a naughty story for animegirl 2012, da?"

Lorraine: Da ivan." :)  


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Hehehehe~ I was so waiting for that. xDD

And eeee! Feeling special, I is! >//w//< First off, sorry about the accidental offense in my comments. ^^; I just can't help it. Papa!Russia is my all-time fave, and just...Mmng! So much love! C//x But um...Da. I'm over 18. :3 I'm like....SERIOUSLY hyped for this story, if you decide to write it! >//w//< PAPA!RUSSIA FOR EVEEEEEER!!